Richie McCaw Sick sentances

The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.

Woosh the oval object speed towards me it flew down out of the sky.  My legs bent downwards, my feet left the ground I was like a spring that had been coiled down and let go.  Hands rushed out but mine were the closest with a thud the ball landed in my hands. Adrenaline coursed through me my lungs felt like bursting as I quivered. I ran hard I knew if I was tackled we would lose when I dived for the try the whistle went I was the one who scored the winning try.